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Damage
Contributed by
PreciousKitten
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Tuesday, 13th January 2009 @ 12:56:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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sometimes you dont realize what you have done
until you notice
all the damage
you have left
you have caused
you have done
no one in this entire world is perfect
but
who says that life is perfect all by itself
so before you berate someone
look at yourself first
before you speak
thank you
Copyright ©
PreciousKitten
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2009-01-13 12:56:26]
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Re: Damage
(User Rating: 1 )
by spanky on
Tuesday, 13th January 2009 @ 07:29:39 PM AEST
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Beyond a doubt, this is the worst poem I have ever read-and I'm 93 years old, my little pussy cat girl!
This is your golden opportunity-a chance to read a poem written by me...perhaps the greatest poet of all time. I'm sure you'll agree.
They placed the noose around my neck-
I quickly said a prayer.
And then, before I knew it
I was dangling in the air!
And there I hung suspended-
God...I couldn't catch my breath!
I thought about forever
As I contemplated death.
And then I resurrected
To another time and place-
A doctor slapped my bottom,
And my mother kissed my face.
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Re: Damage
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 13th January 2009 @ 07:30:27 PM AEST
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I like the you tell them attitude in this write.
Yes how true, but do you notice, the ones who have
the insecurity are the ones who like to give others what for?
Good for you dear!
Nice strong write.
Hugs and have a lovely night my dear
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Re: Damage
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 14th January 2009 @ 06:02:29 PM AEST
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nice poem, i liked it.
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