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Her Rose of Red
Contributed by
shelby
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Monday, 12th January 2009 @ 10:17:18 PM in AEST
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Her rose of red petals soft.
Near her bed stand was tossed.
Petals wilting falling round.
Clock on the wall only sound.
Red red wine glass half empty.
Pretense to her mood.
Candles lit and gone unnoticed
all around the room.
Her red rose lost to her thoughts.
gardens crowding neath the windows.
No thoughts no wishes only stares
beneath her breasts burdened gloom.
She heard the music heard a voice.
Yet her mind nor heart wanted to believe.
She saw her face but thought her eyes
at that moment had somehow deceived.
A beautiful fairy with a red rose her rose of red she thought.
But the rose had been transformed once more,
and the fairy placed it careful in a magical pot.
She stared a moment then she was gone.
to be continued............
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shelby
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2009-01-12 22:17:18]
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Re: Her Rose of Red
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by emystar on
Monday, 12th January 2009 @ 10:44:24 PM AEST
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Yo Shel,
Really good work here.
Can't wait to read the rest.Big luv, huggs, blessings,
emy |
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Re: Her Rose of Red
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by Crow on
Tuesday, 13th January 2009 @ 08:00:37 AM AEST
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| well crap, now I got to wait for more! get with it I`m hooked now! love this stuff my friend. Vincent |
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Re: Her Rose of Red
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 13th January 2009 @ 01:37:08 PM AEST
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i await the next installment, this was a very good opening.
-phil |
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Re: Her Rose of Red
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by lnnie on
Wednesday, 14th January 2009 @ 12:15:45 AM AEST
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Loved the images and the drama here.
Fantasy and beauty mix so... well
good write.
You seem to be moving and develping new ways
and new styles
Love it.
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Re: Her Rose of Red
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by EcuaOrgullo310 on
Wednesday, 21st January 2009 @ 12:11:17 PM AEST
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It paints a picture.
conveys feelings.
makes you wonder what's going on in your head while you're writing it.
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