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Beautiful Mother Earth
Contributed by
butterflyperfect
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Monday, 12th January 2009 @ 07:57:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Sometimes what you lack to see
Is something with the most beauty
In your mind you think one thing
Then you feel you heart sing
For sometimes beauty is not seen by you
But for someone else, its all they knew
At the thought of water all around
There is always a new sound
Splashing as the ore hits the water
I pretend I am your daughter
Cause this Earth can be my mother of beauty
If I can only do Earth that duty
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2009-01-12 19:57:26]
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Re: Beautiful Mother Earth
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 13th January 2009 @ 01:28:40 PM AEST
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well i think the tactic worked lol it was very descriptive and vivid. an enjoyable read, good work.
love,
phil |
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Re: Beautiful Mother Earth
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 13th January 2009 @ 09:50:21 PM AEST
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| Good, thoughtful on the Earth Mother. venkat |
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