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Stolen Light
Contributed by
ravenblack_phoenix
on
Saturday, 22nd March 2003 @ 03:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I tried to keep that light alive,
It once was brightly shining,
But since you left it unattended,
That light, it ended up dying...
A drop of light falls to the floor,
A drop, and then another,
Until the light, it is no more,
It's slipped right through my hopeful hands.
I honestly tried to save it.
To stop the leakage of my heart,
But the more I tried to halt it,
The more you caused it to bleed...
In love, yes,
I once believed,
But it's truly sad how you can't see...
The treasures that have been stolen,
By you simple carelessness towards me...
But I tried to keep that light alive,
As you painfully left it unattended.
What once was bright and thrived and shined,
Winked out, it's fuse unmended...
Copyright ©
ravenblack_phoenix
... [
2003-03-22 15:25:00]
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Re: Stolen Light
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by wolfflow on
Saturday, 22nd March 2003 @ 04:41:14 PM AEST
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| a wonderful poem, the imagery works so well, so clear and succinct, hope it all works out for you |
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Re: Stolen Light
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 22nd March 2003 @ 04:53:10 PM AEST
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| so sad, love is a treasure.......... |
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Re: Stolen Light
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by ktbugg on
Saturday, 22nd March 2003 @ 06:18:21 PM AEST
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| awesome poem!! heartbreaking but expresses a hard emotion well... i feel ya.... good write! |
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Re: Stolen Light
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by sand_paper_tears on
Tuesday, 25th March 2003 @ 06:03:11 PM AEST
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| poems don't often remind me of a specific time i hurt someone, but this one did. thanks for the memories... |
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Re: Stolen Light
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by Feelin_Like_A_SadFellow on
Sunday, 30th March 2003 @ 11:33:03 AM AEST
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| i like this one.. nice write |
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