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The Love I Lost
Contributed by
winton54
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Monday, 12th January 2009 @ 01:11:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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In the night when i sleep,
I only dream of you.
The dreams they are so sweet,
But i know they wont come true.
If i could find a way
To make me dream forever more,
I would gladly take it,
And stay with you some more.
But dreaming forever only comes when u die,
And im not ready for that day, its not time to say goodbye.
So until that day i'll be with you in my dreams,
And be happy like we used to be until i wake it seems.
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winton54
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2009-01-12 13:11:32]
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Re: The Love I Lost
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by Butterflyperfect on
Monday, 12th January 2009 @ 07:24:50 PM AEST
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Very Nice Write. So short and simple, but it gets the message across.
Love Always,
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Re: The Love I Lost
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by lonely_boy on
Monday, 12th January 2009 @ 11:04:24 PM AEST
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excellent write. i hope to read more of your stuff.
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Re: The Love I Lost
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 13th January 2009 @ 01:10:35 PM AEST
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i could sense an underlying angst and sadness in this write. it was a very powerful poem, great work.
-phil |
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