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humiliation
Contributed by
derickkk
on
Monday, 12th January 2009 @ 10:15:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Through humiliation you push away,
You're only tormenting yourself.
Though I have no cause of error,
I exhale and try to re-approach the problem.
You can't admit what is right, confused
That is what love really means.
I try so hard, but I get no response.
Though I don't shed tears, I hold my bottled feelings up inside of me.
There is no justice here
I feel forgotten.
You have stripped the honor of me, and removed the crown from my empty head.
All i did was care nothing more, nor less.
My way is blocked, i cannot pass.
Shrouding the endless path of darkness.
I may never again heal from this,
Maybe permanently destroyed.
I just lye there, dead and lifeless.
With nothing to love, my life...useless.
Anger boils and burns beneath us.
My desires for anything have weakened.
You have killed a part of me.
A part in which i will never forget.
Never-the-less forgive you,
For what has been done.
This I will HATE YOU for…
But I will always be your friend…
And there and never again shall...
I go through the pain and torment in which you put me through!!!!
Why must I keep away?
I have the knowledge of many men,
Though I don't shed many secrets.
My life has been hidden from my-self.
I don't know who I really am n-e more.
People don't know the real me!!!
Everyone has been deceived.
They need to know the truth,,,
But the truth......
Shall remain sacred and un-revealed
Moving on
I feel no regret for what has happened.
It is now time
Time to move on with my life.
The memory, is no more of you
I shall never forget the good times,
A friend as always...
But you break the promise...
TO NEVER HURT ME... again and again.
Moving on for the better,
FOGETTING the memories of a HURTFUL PAST!!!!
Why must i exist..
If day-by-day i am hurting.
I am hurting inside.
Listing to what are thoughts in a empty head.
Silence is every were....
No on knows........ How I feel
Crying at what my life could be.
I am already dying inside,
If not, my soul is all ready dead.
I cannot forgive what has been done,
PLEASE FORGIVE ME!!!!
That is what will become of me...
FORGIVE ME!!!!
Copyright ©
derickkk
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2009-01-12 10:15:02]
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Re: humiliation
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by spanky on
Monday, 12th January 2009 @ 06:56:35 PM AEST
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This is not really poetry by anyone's definition. It is sheer utter nonsense. It is the poorly-written mindless ranting of an adult with a two year old's grasp of language.
EGAD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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