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Unititled
Contributed by
stress707
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Monday, 12th January 2009 @ 01:52:48 AM in AEST
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The city looks lonely tonight-
Its stories have all run out
and it is left with a soft, lost expression
its gaze illuminated and falling.
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stress707
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2009-01-12 01:52:48]
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Re: Unititled
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 12th January 2009 @ 05:00:56 AM AEST
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maybe what you could do is look through the same journal and find things that could be sewed into this and then re read old things you have written and listen to music that inspires you.
i think this coudl be a great beginning to something.
-Blessed be
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Re: Unititled
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by Incognito_Bombastus on
Monday, 12th January 2009 @ 05:24:37 PM AEST
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I agree with the other contributer it is a finely woven begining with ample scope to launch into any direction you choose. From city stories as vinnettes through to a metaphysical city of your own mental awareness & consciousness. May try an armagedon of the city or a utopic space for exploration.
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