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Revel
Contributed by
Loende
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Sunday, 11th January 2009 @ 08:01:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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Steep in the darkness
accept this is your fate now
revel in the rage
Copyright ©
Loende
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2009-01-11 20:01:11]
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Re: Revel
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 11th January 2009 @ 09:13:39 PM AEST
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Hmmm... I read one of your forum posts and I think you were also saying there you could not write Haikus. which by the way, I have been unable to find the Silent-No-More poem I spoke of there.
Anywho...Haiku. They're not easy in my humble opinion. Sometimes they just seem to fall short and to get the meaning into them, in such a short and specific format is difficult. However, you seemed to have pulled it off...again, that is in this guy's humble opinion. I like it. Really, I do.
So...will you be taking a stab at the Haiku thread now? :D
Take care,
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Re: Revel
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 12th January 2009 @ 03:02:04 PM AEST
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good work.
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Re: Revel
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by karoody on
Monday, 12th January 2009 @ 07:09:00 PM AEST
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This may not be your norm,
but you have done it well
Good work, my friend!
Smiles and Blessings to you and yours
Kara
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