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edge of reason
Contributed by
fortunesdancer
on
Sunday, 11th January 2009 @ 09:35:22 AM in AEST
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your lips your hair
your mischevious stare
we love you but
you dont care
you glance at me
and i dare
to wonder
do you like me?
hair of silken ebony black
eyes of hazels proud shade
lips of hellish flaming red
looks that could knock a man dead
sculpted
tall
temptress
stuff of dreams
in flesh
your in love
yes with mike
but not with me
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2009-01-11 09:35:22]
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Re: edge of reason
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by elle on
Sunday, 11th January 2009 @ 10:00:16 AM AEST
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| your alluring description attests to the feelings one could easily drown in, if not for reason. nicely done. peace,.elle |
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Re: edge of reason
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 12th January 2009 @ 02:46:52 PM AEST
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yes i've had exactly the same experience myself. you superbly described the angst and irritation that i felt at the time. horrible feeling. anyway, good writing.
-phil |
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