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What's Real

Contributed by moir3241 on Saturday, 10th January 2009 @ 11:21:06 PM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered



When will you understand
That I can’t get you off my mind.
We’ve tried to live our lives apart
But there’s no one that compares with you.

I’ve memorized your smile
And the creases of your eyes,
Don’t make me start with someone else,
I know that they’re not worth my time.

Let’s give us one more shot
Another chance at happiness
I’ve wanted you all this time
Can’t you see we have what’s real;
The real thing,
It's meant for only us.

Our story's barely started
I won’t settle for an another unhappy ending;
So don’t say that you’re leaving
And we’d be better off alone.

Why can't you see it when I can sense it-
Why can't you feel it when I have no doubt-
There’s no turning back our time is running out.

Let's give us one more shot
Another chance at happiness
I’ve wanted you all this time
Can’t you see we have what’s real;
The real thing,
It's meant for only us.

You’re tearing me apart,
All I need is one more kiss-
Maybe then you’ll finally see,
How perfect we could be.

Now the rest is up to you,
If you have it in your heart
Reach for my hand and I'll be yours.




Copyright © moir3241 ... [ 2009-01-10 23:21:06]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: What's Real (User Rating: 1 )
by Loriann on Sunday, 11th January 2009 @ 04:37:11 PM AEST
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I can relate to this many years ago. I felt this way. Over time though it seems that it wasn't what I needed and wanted and found happiness with someone else. But I know it is how many feel . Great job.


Re: What's Real (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy on Monday, 12th January 2009 @ 03:18:58 AM AEST
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there is so much emotion! i can really relate to this one as i still would like to be the one i lost! Great write!

Puppy :)




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