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China Dolls
Contributed by
karoody
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Saturday, 10th January 2009 @ 10:47:44 PM in AEST
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EmotionalPoetry
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Beautiful China Doll
Fractured with time
You want to love her
So innocent and fragile
Yet it hurts so badly
Offer her some glue
And the cracks still show
Frustration sets in
Your glue begins to harden
Don't know why
You just watch her cry
With resentment in your heart
Trying to place the blame
Reasons for all this pain
For love of the China Doll
Who couldn't hide the cracks
Copyright ©
karoody
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2009-01-10 22:47:44]
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Re: China Dolls
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by emystar on
Sunday, 11th January 2009 @ 12:33:18 AM AEST
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Beautiful writing.
Awesome.
huggs, blessings,
emy |
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Re: China Dolls
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by Voice of the Silent on
Sunday, 11th January 2009 @ 03:55:37 AM AEST
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great write
no need to hide the cracks let people see you for who you are and if they don't like it then oh well
be who you want to be and don't care what others think
great write glad to see your starting to write more
hope to read more soon
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Re: China Dolls
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by Crow on
Sunday, 11th January 2009 @ 09:56:32 AM AEST
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my friend...I hope you get a breath, we never like to see the ones we care about "in pieces.
good wrok, Vincent |
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Re: China Dolls
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 12th January 2009 @ 02:31:38 AM AEST
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Beautiful China Doll
Most precious ever
We all do love her
So innocent and fragile
And no matter what
we will be there to pick
Up the peices
and hold them steady
Loves you Karabeara!!!
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Re: China Dolls
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by myheartsvoice on
Tuesday, 13th January 2009 @ 01:58:09 AM AEST
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A melloncholy feeling came
over me reading this, along
with a sentimental recall of
what your tittle conveyed, so
clear and fragile is your style
of writting, simply beautiful,
i get a comforting feeling,
reading your poetry . . .
Ben . . . |
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Re: China Dolls
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by Spike on
Tuesday, 13th January 2009 @ 06:24:44 AM AEST
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Nicely done.
It can get frustrating when all attempts yield no lasting change - compassion runs out along with patience.
Spike |
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Re: China Dolls
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by eeeitak on
Monday, 26th January 2009 @ 08:47:56 PM AEST
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| you are very talented. this is wonderful! |
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