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Softness of Harsh
Contributed by
shelby
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Saturday, 10th January 2009 @ 01:58:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Billows of feather’s cascaded down from Heavens windows.
Dusting cactus tine, sage brush and sand.
Wilds of the desert softly turned, into a winter wonderland.
A veil of azure opened up above the sand and stone.
Cold breath of wind turned the feather snow into ice crystals,
frozen within times final moment beneath the suns glow.
Gazing across the vastness of this desert I know so well.
The unforgiving heat and dry wind it is hard to tell just now.
From summer time and fires breath, transformed before my eyes.
Abandoned lands to friend or foe, the strangling dusty air.
Now a gorgeous view of another time, winters white dusted hue.
I smile to myself at the sight of it, indeed this moment here is rare.
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shelby
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2009-01-10 13:58:49]
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Re: Softness of Harsh
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by myheartsvoice on
Saturday, 10th January 2009 @ 02:32:43 PM AEST
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Shel, I love the picture the poem
and the concept of softness of
harsh, it's like you took some
of those eliments in this picture,
and fashoned an artist's paint
brush to pen this poetry, your
a writters writter, beautiful work
my friend 4get the cones, you
get the whole ice cream truck . . .
ty likewise 4 your always
most sincere comments
and reads, means alot
coming from you . . .
happy new year . . .
((((Michelle))))
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Re: Softness of Harsh
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Saturday, 10th January 2009 @ 03:25:02 PM AEST
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Oh Michelle, these exquisite words can not but be a confirmation of the possibility of transformation at any moment in time.
No matter how short they be, "Insight " was given..
Precious ~
Love ad peace dear fried
Elizabeth |
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Re: Softness of Harsh
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by emystar on
Sunday, 11th January 2009 @ 01:41:31 AM AEST
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Beautiful work. I've seen lotssa dessert but this is my first time to see snow there.
Thanks for sharing.
Wuvs ya,
emy |
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Re: Softness of Harsh
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 11th January 2009 @ 06:13:56 AM AEST
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an extraordinary event, which you expressed so wonderfully. i enjoyed this write, it was a beautiful read.
-phil |
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Re: Softness of Harsh
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by Spike on
Sunday, 11th January 2009 @ 06:56:14 AM AEST
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great descriptive observation, Michelle, with a light dusting of seasonal wonder...
Spike |
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Re: Softness of Harsh
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by Crow on
Sunday, 11th January 2009 @ 09:59:14 AM AEST
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| now this is something i`ve never seen...excellent write, and with a picture makes it very special. Vincent |
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