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my hatchet
Contributed by
nightwolf
on
Saturday, 10th January 2009 @ 03:13:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
psychoticpoems
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Hatchet in my hand
Body in my trunk
Driving up to my cabin
Got to burry this punk
Wont be long
Before the cops come running
Keep my hatchet ready
More dead bodies coming
Chop off theyre heads
Through them on a shelf
Got a body collection
That I keep for myself
Some call me mental
Some call me sick
Some beat me with bats
Some beat me with a stick
But they wont for long
Im coming back around
They will be in my collection
When my hatchet swings down
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nightwolf
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2009-01-10 03:13:06]
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Re: my hatchet
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 10th January 2009 @ 11:16:16 AM AEST
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| entertaining and morbid. Absolutely love it |
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Re: my hatchet
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by shelby on
Saturday, 10th January 2009 @ 11:20:01 AM AEST
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OMG this could be a horror film, just my type LOL.
Ok remind me not to make you mad ok??
I do not have my sword to protect myself with against you and the hatchet.LOL
Really kidding aside, I like the poem, very dark. it flowed well and is written well.
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Re: my hatchet
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by fanniesson on
Saturday, 10th January 2009 @ 02:19:05 PM AEST
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don't think i wanna meet you LOL
enjoyed the read kept my attention
i must admit
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Re: my hatchet
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 11th January 2009 @ 06:02:16 AM AEST
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ferociously dark, it had the ring of a 1970's slasher movie lol i liked it actually, it seemed to have a dark, ironic humour to it.
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