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Someone My Heart Always Knew . . . Ben
Contributed by
myheartsvoice
on
Friday, 9th January 2009 @ 12:08:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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A
beauty you were
and still you are
forever to me you'll
remain,
the
angel that puts
the glow in my star
even amidst the
rain.
A
portrait upon
life's canvas of love
perfection that knows
no
decease,
who brought from beyond
the heavens above
the meaning
of
masterpiece.
I
love thee as no one
i've love'd before your
someone my heart always
knew,
no sooner you walke'd
through that night club door
this heart fell in love with
you.
You
more than stood out
above all the rest
amidst the music and light,
needless to say
when these eyes saw the best
this heart was convinced
they were
right.
How
could you be so beautiful?
like someone right out of
a
dream,
yet i could feel
you were more than real
comprised of a flawless
scheme.
Somewhere
far off where angels live
and dreams await there birth,
our love was designed
with us in mind
to
live and to love on this
earth.
A
beauty you were
and no less now
forever my sweetheart
you'll
be,
who one night while i
was playing guitar
discovered your love,
in my
key.
Ben
myheartsvoice
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Re: Someone My Heart Always Knew . . . Ben
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Saturday, 10th January 2009 @ 12:14:53 AM AEST (User
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That is really awesome, Ben, and I'm not just sayin' that. I really like this one too.
You really have captured the awe of seeing that one....that special one...that stands out in a crowd for you. Awesome.
Take care and as always, thank you for sharing with us that special dream that has come true for you.
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Re: Someone My Heart Always Knew . . . Ben
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Saturday, 10th January 2009 @ 11:32:33 AM AEST (User
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I can picture this all in my mind and together the two of you have been ever since. It is a rare and beautiful thing to see that one and then spend the rest of your life with them. Beautiful work my friend.
huggles from ur puggles
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Re: Someone My Heart Always Knew . . . Ben
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Sunday, 11th January 2009 @ 02:23:23 AM AEST (User
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Wow, your writes to your incredible wife never get boring.
Say hey for me.
huggs, smiles, blessings,
emy |
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Re: Someone My Heart Always Knew . . . Ben
(User Rating: 1 ) by karoody on
Monday, 12th January 2009 @ 03:02:46 AM AEST (User
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Ben~
This is definitely my favorite!
I love the language you chose
to tell this story....
Breathtaking!
The story itself was also great to hear
It made me smile
Thank you so much for the read!
Smiles and Blessings to the both of you
Kara |
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Re: Someone My Heart Always Knew . . . Ben
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 13th January 2009 @ 01:41:38 PM AEST (User
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This is a very beautiful poem! very Touching! |
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Re: Someone My Heart Always Knew . . . Ben
(User Rating: 1 ) by FleurdeSang on
Monday, 4th May 2009 @ 03:38:44 PM AEST (User
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Ah, my dear friend... Your love still puts stars in my eyes, even if the old ones have long since died. It's good to see you.. I apologize for my absence. It's been... interesting, life. I hope you are doing well, and that there is sunshine to light up your heart everyday. This is beautiful, you never fail to soften the heart. Thank you for sharing your love with us. I hope to hear from you, :). All my love, as always.
~Stephy.
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