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Breaking.
Contributed by
emmyb14
on
Thursday, 8th January 2009 @ 06:07:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
self-harmpoetry
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I can't take this pain
Find my vain
Nothing more to say
Beware of betray
Grab the knife
Debate taking my life
Two choices: live or die
Not even close to a tie
My mind is made -
All other thoughts fade
Blood on my hands
The way of my plans
Tears down my face
Memories I can't erase
Breaking my skin
I let it win -
Copyright ©
emmyb14
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2009-01-08 18:07:18]
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Re: Breaking.
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Thursday, 8th January 2009 @ 06:42:16 PM AEST
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powerful, heart wrenching stuff. you were very direct, which i liked. good work.
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Re: Breaking.
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by Butterflyperfect on
Thursday, 8th January 2009 @ 11:17:08 PM AEST
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Wow, you have a strength in these words that are incredible.
Powerful write.
Take Care,
~Butterfly |
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