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Immortal Sin
Contributed by
emmyb14
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Wednesday, 7th January 2009 @ 06:57:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Secrets deep within
Clinging to immortal sin
Down in my soul
Holding in every goal
Captive against my will
Giving me the power to kill
Back away
Before on the ground you lay
This is my final avenge
Getting my last revenge
Shouldn't of trapped me in
What killed me was my sin
I hold it high
Soon to die
Pull the trigger
Call the digger
I'll be the one with the last laugh
And you, my sacremental calf
Will have the last cry
When your bones shrivel and dry
Copyright ©
emmyb14
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2009-01-07 18:57:35]
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Re: Immortal Sin
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 7th January 2009 @ 07:06:25 PM AEST
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It is well written but it has some suicidal references in it and I am very touchy about suicide and suicide poetry.
The poem itself like I said is written with good flow and tone.
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Re: Immortal Sin
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by Butterflyperfect on
Thursday, 8th January 2009 @ 12:25:16 AM AEST
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A very deep, enchanting write.
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