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Angel of Shadows
Contributed by
ravenblack_phoenix
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Saturday, 22nd March 2003 @ 12:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Angel of shadows,
Thorn on the rose,
Fallen from heaven,
From hell she's arose.
Too bright for the darkness,
Yet too dim for the light,
Sun burns her skin, unable to see night.
Nowhere near holy,
Far from demonic,
She seems simply human, vulnerable to tonic.
She is but a wanderer,
No place to call home,
Perpetual in nature, no hand on which to hold.
Her searching may seem ceaseless,
The objective unknown,
Perhaps it is within her?
Deep inside she withholds...
The secret that may show her,
The path that may be shadowed,
The path that may be illuminated,
Or a soul that may be hollowed....
Whichever destination,
Her search is near its end,
Her secret, once revealed,
Traveler's wounds it will mend.
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Re: Angel of Shadows
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by shelby on
Saturday, 22nd March 2003 @ 01:11:29 PM AEST
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Wow! Powerful write. I like it.
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Re: Angel of Shadows
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by 9-volt on
Saturday, 22nd March 2003 @ 01:44:46 PM AEST
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| that is very good... i like it as well. |
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Re: Angel of Shadows
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 24th March 2003 @ 05:55:16 AM AEST
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Very good if not a bit confusing. You describe her as if she cannot be defined. She is not good or bad, not from heaven or hell.
I like it
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Re: Angel of Shadows
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by youngpoet1989 on
Tuesday, 1st April 2003 @ 08:08:23 PM AEST
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This poem is both great and sad,
I love this poem.
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