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Blue hearts
Contributed by
shelby
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Tuesday, 6th January 2009 @ 05:15:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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His heart,
colored in blue.
Pastel shades of pain.
Even the crystals shining like diamonds
neath a suns rays....
Wont let the frost of the moments go.
It lingers.... It hurts
deep winter sting
an ache that wont leave....
His loss is bitter.
Words I have not.....
Winters breath brings his blue
and it forms around me miles away
from where he sits alone.
Nothing I can do
to help him escape his blue heart.
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shelby
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2009-01-06 17:15:41]
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Re: Blue hearts
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 6th January 2009 @ 06:30:50 PM AEST
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a very powerful and enduring write, great work.
-phil |
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Re: Blue hearts
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by catz77 on
Tuesday, 6th January 2009 @ 07:34:12 PM AEST
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Painful, the helplessness we feel.
Good write. ^_^ |
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Re: Blue hearts
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by karoody on
Tuesday, 6th January 2009 @ 11:38:38 PM AEST
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very well done
great imagery, so much emotion
so sad how some just can't
release themselves from their pasts
hugs and love
kara |
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Re: Blue hearts
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by Crow on
Wednesday, 7th January 2009 @ 09:10:14 AM AEST
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| great thoughts here Shel..I know the subject in this write, and the loss suffered. good work my friend. Vincent |
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