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Scarred
Contributed by
MarcusLane
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Tuesday, 6th January 2009 @ 04:27:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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A sleeping beast beneath a placid lake
Has risen, trailing venom in his wake.
Young innocents on whom he fell now cower
In tearful terror of pent-up unleashed power.
His lashing tongue has spat forth flame, his grin
Has left its lifelong scars beneath their skin.
His wounding done, he drags his loathsome bulk
Beneath the swirling waters, there to sulk.
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MarcusLane
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2009-01-06 16:27:57]
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Re: Scarred
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 6th January 2009 @ 07:04:15 PM AEST
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This is a fear filled write. It reminds me of something I wont talk about but this is powerful I like it.
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Re: Scarred
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by catz77 on
Tuesday, 6th January 2009 @ 07:53:08 PM AEST
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| I like this muchly. |
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Re: Scarred
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by unknown_utopia on
Tuesday, 6th January 2009 @ 10:50:44 PM AEST
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The sleeping Beast......
I like the way this flows. |
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