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the sound of blood
Contributed by
beefybeebuzz
on
Tuesday, 6th January 2009 @ 02:18:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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always tired, never sleeping
depressed and lost, but never weeping
lost in thought but never thinking
never rising, always sinking
hates the world, but shows much kindness
not oblivious, but scarred by blindness
cry for he who must hide
who he really is inside
cry for he who's lost his will
living long, but is so ill
who is this person? what has fate prescribed for he?
this person i describe is me, and fate has issued misery.
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2009-01-06 02:18:05] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: the sound of blood
(User Rating: 1 ) by Puppy on
Monday, 12th January 2009 @ 03:28:44 AM AEST (User
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wow..this is different to your other poem i just read! Everyone gets down and feels like life is not worth living and you feel that life has dealed you a rotten hand!! i know i've felt like that too often to count! but i just read your lastest poem about your girlfriend so remember the good things in your life and don't focus on the negitive as it can really pull you down! great write by the way!
Puppy :) |
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