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all the time in the world
Contributed by
dreama
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Saturday, 22nd March 2003 @ 10:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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most of the time we put things off and say
whatever it is will wait for another day
but as life constantly proves to us, son
anything can happen anytime to anyone
life can be going smoothly some days
one minute your smiling during a laze
and the next your wearing a deep frown
because your whole worlds been turned upside down
a thought thats very scary to me
is that my life could soon be a memory
and all i am now will become what was
theres nothing i can do so i keep smiling because
you cant change the nature of time and life
we constantly live through hardship and strife
but with each day we should get stronger
because we might not be for much longer
so cherrish every moment so you might think
how amazing life is and give us a wink
always be aware that nothing is set
so you should enjoy the time you get
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dreama
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2003-03-22 10:05:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: all the time in the world
(User Rating: 1 ) by wolfflow on
Saturday, 22nd March 2003 @ 10:46:35 AM AEST (User
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hey, nice one, wisdom beyond your years and an enjoyable read too |
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Re: all the time in the world
(User Rating: 1 ) by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Saturday, 22nd March 2003 @ 11:49:31 AM AEST (User
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I love this... great write! |
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Re: all the time in the world
(User Rating: 1 ) by tease_whizz on
Sunday, 23rd March 2003 @ 03:49:28 PM AEST (User
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wow, what a great write - from one philosopher to another, well done! this is a philosophy we could all do well to live by. check out some of my work if you like. excellent poem, keep them coming, Kate x |
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Re: all the time in the world
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Monday, 24th March 2003 @ 05:37:15 AM AEST (User
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This poem really touched me. I know exactly what you mean. My father died a year ago almost to the day and my whole life had turned upside down becuase I didn't even know he was ill.
It is amazing how everything can change in a matter of minutes.
Thanks for sharing - it is nice to know that there are people that understand.
sleepless_siren |
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Re: all the time in the world
(User Rating: 1 ) by Dot on
Monday, 24th March 2003 @ 03:39:10 PM AEST (User
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Wise words, my friend. Nice poem. Dot |
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Re: all the time in the world
(User Rating: 1 ) by Wrybod on
Monday, 7th April 2003 @ 06:13:57 AM AEST (User
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Enjoyed the verse, (life's so perverse)
The theorie's sound, the writing's neat
but it helps us all stay out of the hearse
if you watch where you're putting your feet
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