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dead or alone
Contributed by
polaris773
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Sunday, 4th January 2009 @ 04:01:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Instead of getting it over with
We hold on and waste each others time
Thinking its better to be unhappy together
Being miserable has to be worse than being alone
So we both fight to stay, and we fight to fight
We both wish we can leave
But none of us want to be lonely
It’s easier to yell at the person who you once loved
You didn’t know how the times changed you both
How afraid you are to leave now
How sad you are staying here
Both wishing one had the courage
To say what the other is thinking
Its better to be dead in a relationship then to be free and alone
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polaris773
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2009-01-04 16:01:36]
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Re: dead or alone
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by suze on
Sunday, 4th January 2009 @ 09:16:25 PM AEST
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Ahh yes, i understand this...
It's a well written piece.
Keep writing!
I don't really agree with the ending line,
but i think its great you put your opinions into poetry :)
-sue. |
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Re: dead or alone
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by Butterflyperfect on
Monday, 5th January 2009 @ 04:16:32 PM AEST
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A very relatable write! Good Job!!
Take Care,
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