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the blood flows black
Contributed by
nightwolf
on
Sunday, 4th January 2009 @ 02:02:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Sitting in a cold dark room
The old man
Eyes glazed with fear
Waits for an escape
That may never come
Outside the door
The beast
Stomach churning with hunger
Smells the blood
Of his hunted meal
Earlier in the night
The old man
In the pine filled wood
Ran from what seemed
To be the fastest man he ever seen
But this was no man
This man
With an insatiable thirst for blood
And hair so thick
Covered it from head to toe
The door burst open
The beast
Now in the room eyes fixed
Lunges for the old man
And the hunt is over
Hours later the old man
Awoke enraged
Deep in his now cold body
In the veins of the man
The blood now flows black
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nightwolf
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2009-01-04 14:02:49]
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Re: the blood flows black
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by eeeitak on
Sunday, 4th January 2009 @ 03:05:20 PM AEST
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| this is so cool. i really love your style. |
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Re: the blood flows black
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by elle on
Sunday, 4th January 2009 @ 04:59:18 PM AEST
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| vivid story-telling at its' best. short but bold & subtle with desciption. in my opinion, very good. peace. elle |
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Re: the blood flows black
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 4th January 2009 @ 05:56:31 PM AEST
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a fluid, creative, interesting write. i enjoyed reading it. great work.
-phil |
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Re: the blood flows black
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by Anu on
Monday, 5th January 2009 @ 11:38:07 AM AEST
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gr8 Imagination ..very well put in words...!
~~Anu |
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Re: the blood flows black
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by Butterflyperfect on
Monday, 5th January 2009 @ 04:13:21 PM AEST
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Very entertaining read. I liked it. Great Job!!
Take Care,
~Butterfly |
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