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Cradle to the Cage
Contributed by
crow
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Sunday, 4th January 2009 @ 12:10:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Here is one truth
if you choose,
from the "cradle, to the cage
answer for it all.
The effort remains
till the very last breath
one sin leads You to another.
Don`t be afraid
if the chances are thinning,
its in every heart and soul,
"We never say enough.
Scattering the ashes
they never needed much more
to tell you the "truth
its whats in the Other hearts.
There You will stand
on some wind sweep hill..
looking down at the "dirt
that covers My smile.....Vincent
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2009-01-04 12:10:00]
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Re: Cradle to the Cage
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 4th January 2009 @ 05:10:50 PM AEST
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Hmmmm... positive and uplifting yet one's hurting soul can sometimes cause them to no longer have faith in other's hearts. Yeah, I have trust issues. :-) I like the poem, though...so please don't get me wrong. Very well endowed with cool metaphors. I especially like
There You will stand
on some wind sweep hill..
looking down at the "dirt
that covers My smile
Thanks for an enjoyable read.
Tim
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Re: Cradle to the Cage
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 4th January 2009 @ 05:58:13 PM AEST
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very good writing again vincent.
-phil |
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Re: Cradle to the Cage
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by ribbons_and_lace09 on
Sunday, 4th January 2009 @ 06:34:11 PM AEST
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| very good! i loved it! |
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Re: Cradle to the Cage
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by emystar on
Sunday, 4th January 2009 @ 10:25:11 PM AEST
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Tantalizing, mezermerising,
wo any ways this write rocks,
You just reach and grab the heart.
awesome!
huggs, smiles, blessings, trust,
emy |
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Re: Cradle to the Cage
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by karoody on
Monday, 5th January 2009 @ 06:13:25 PM AEST
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i appreciate you for this write
faith is important to hang on to
a beautiful write
smiles and love
kara |
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Re: Cradle to the Cage
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 5th May 2010 @ 05:52:30 PM AEST
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i don't know about anyone else but this gave me chills, lol, vivid excellent,
hugs n' love nessa |
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