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Speaking on Ends
Contributed by
shelby
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Sunday, 4th January 2009 @ 12:49:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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We whisper or shout, at the final moments.
A year closing a new chapter beginning.
A brief moment of relief, hands letting go.
Countdowns slow but spinning forward a bit to fast.
We catch a glimpse out of the corner of our eye.
That ghost or haunt of passing of time.
Friend or a foe matters not for that second.
It was but a glimpse then the shadow was gone.
Speaking on ends... or endings.
Paths that ended abrupt, before we wanted it to go.
Letting go, hanging on, pushing away.
Like the little tug boat set adrift in a storm at sea.
You hear it in the silence of fresh fallen snow,
a whisper on a chanting frozen winter breeze.
The breath on the back of your neck....
A ghost to all that was once before.
Copyright ©
shelby
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2009-01-04 00:49:13]
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Re: Speaking on Ends
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by emystar on
Sunday, 4th January 2009 @ 01:58:22 AM AEST
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Well thank God for that.
Awesome write girl. Something that awakens the senses.
Big smiles, luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Speaking on Ends
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by venkat on
Sunday, 4th January 2009 @ 03:15:07 AM AEST
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| Aww..lovely..its like a whisper on a chanting frozen winter breez and the breath on the back on my neck...O dear friend.. huggs..:-) venkat |
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Re: Speaking on Ends
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by Crow on
Sunday, 4th January 2009 @ 12:18:38 PM AEST
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| Shel...like everything in chapters, filed and shelved. I like out there stuff! Vincent |
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Re: Speaking on Ends
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 4th January 2009 @ 05:17:26 PM AEST
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This is a really cool poem, Shall. :-) I really love the analogies and metaphors about life's experiences. Very good.
Thanks,
Tim |
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Re: Speaking on Ends
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 4th January 2009 @ 06:09:49 PM AEST
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tremendous write. the imagery is amazing. i especially liked this bit:
We catch a glimpse out of the corner of our eye.
That ghost or haunt of passing of time.
Friend or a foe matters not for that second.
It was but a glimpse then the shadow was gone.
it was so descriptive and so realistic. brilliant work.
-phil |
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Re: Speaking on Ends
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by karoody on
Monday, 5th January 2009 @ 06:25:19 PM AEST
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I loved this!
You write in this theme very well
Smiles and Hugs
Kara |
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