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The biscuit
Contributed by
chatabox
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Tuesday, 30th July 2002 @ 09:22:31 PM in AEST
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There is a little biscuit,
Staring back at me,
I told it not to worry.
I`m cutting down you see.
Its got a lovely chocolate coat,
But I still refuse to try it,
I can`t be giving in so soon,
Its the first day of my diet.
So go ahead and look at me,
You`re a biscuit not a lover
Triumphantly I turn my back,
And eat its little brother
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2002-07-30 21:22:31]
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Re: The biscuit
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by George on
Tuesday, 30th July 2002 @ 10:59:20 PM AEST
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ah well, not quite so many calories then.
You funny women you. |
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Re: The biscuit
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 31st July 2002 @ 12:18:57 AM AEST
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Hey Chatabox, the more I read of your work, the more I enjoy them.. this one was good... I have stopped dieting now...too frustrating.. I think I'll stay "delightfully plump" as one of my friends so kindly puts it now.....lol
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Re: The biscuit
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by Chrissie on
Wednesday, 31st July 2002 @ 02:14:40 AM AEST
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Love it Penny...you're on form today.
Chrissie xxx |
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Re: The biscuit
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by Brooke on
Wednesday, 31st July 2002 @ 02:41:40 AM AEST
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Another wonderful poem Chatabox (or as Chrissie said, penny.) It put a huge smile on my face.
x Brooke x |
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Re: The biscuit
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by humphdj on
Wednesday, 31st July 2002 @ 06:20:58 AM AEST
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Funny init....them there little choccy biccy's are always starin at me too........such a relief to know I'm not alone.
Magic
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Re: The biscuit
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by ginsdance on
Wednesday, 31st July 2002 @ 01:21:29 PM AEST
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I'm on a diet... the chocolate lovers diet... you have to eat at LEAST 3 pieces of chocolate a day to keep your sanity... LOL. I can never stay on a diet either. Loved this! Keep up the great work!
Gin |
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