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Morning Cries
Contributed by
anomalei
on
Friday, 2nd January 2009 @ 11:40:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Goodbye to night; sun may rise
But you open your expectant eyes -
And darkness remains.
Child so young so bold -
I wish to attach my hand to yours
Guide you through your stumbles
Boys will find their own way,
So find your guiding star -
If you falter, and ask for me; I'll not steer you wrong
Innocence fades, as stars do -
Pinpoints of brilliance;
And someday they all fall away as crumbling walls
Your questioning cries,
As you wonder where your dreams have run to
Waking to a false winter morning
I know why you cry;
When it doesn't seem right to awaken in the dark -
I know your pain.
Copyright ©
anomalei
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2009-01-02 23:40:56]
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Re: Morning Cries
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 3rd January 2009 @ 06:47:44 AM AEST
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a lovely write.
-phil |
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Re: Morning Cries
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by jenniferstein2006 on
Sunday, 4th January 2009 @ 02:54:38 AM AEST
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| this is very very meaningful!!! loved it |
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Re: Morning Cries
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by jenniferstein2006 on
Sunday, 4th January 2009 @ 02:54:40 AM AEST
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| this is very very meaningful!!! loved it |
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Re: Morning Cries
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by amber_vonHorror on
Saturday, 24th January 2009 @ 06:24:00 PM AEST
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hey i quite liked this!
the words worked really well together
great job talk soon xx |
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