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we're only human
Contributed by
Voice of the Silent
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Friday, 2nd January 2009 @ 07:44:27 PM in AEST
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I thought this up when I was reading my book when I put it together in my head it sounded better to me it sounds sloppy but maybe you'll like it
Prime directive: Murder
to kill anyone or anything that gets in our way.
Our main goal that is to say
is to dominate the world.
And why
why is this embedded in the mind of every girl and guy?
because of the two main traits of a human
One intelligence and the thought to survive
this is the main course of thought in the core of the human mind
for all of time
The core of our brain
It's not quite insane
But the core is just madness
this is mankind's main plan
To dominate the world
And what can we all say
We're only human
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Voice of the Silent
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2009-01-02 19:44:27]
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Re: we're only human
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by emystar on
Friday, 2nd January 2009 @ 09:54:07 PM AEST
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There's nothing wrong with this write. You did a great job getting your point across.
Very deep down writing. It's very powerful.
Huggs, luv, smiles, blessings,
emy |
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Re: we're only human
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by karoody on
Saturday, 3rd January 2009 @ 03:52:41 AM AEST
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I do not find this sloppy
You pose quite an interesting point
Can't wait to read more
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Re: we're only human
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 3rd January 2009 @ 06:51:16 AM AEST
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absolutely true. we didn't become dominant by being peaceful and nice. we have killed and pillaged to obtain our position as the dominant species. it's just nature. great write, very interesting.
-phil |
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Re: we're only human
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by Crow on
Saturday, 3rd January 2009 @ 08:53:06 AM AEST
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| not sloppy..as Me thinking of all the little "anthills of humanity, one dominating the other.. good write Kelly. Vincent |
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