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I Beg For Forgiveness
Contributed by
angel-1
on
Friday, 2nd January 2009 @ 07:37:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Your eternal love is all I need,
To guide me through this life.
I’ve never felt more complete,
Than when you’re around.
Just hearing your name
Stirs my heart
Longing for your touch…
For that magic moment
Not touching you is like torture
Pain more than I can bear
For your kiss has cast a spell
Now I can live without it
Together forever
Our souls are linked
I love you more
Than words can describe
The softness of your skin
The smell of your hair
Without it I would empty
Incomplete
A deep hole in my heart
Longing to be filled
Without your love, my darling
I would die a thousand deaths
A thousand deaths for every moment
Every memory, every regret
I live in the moment, my love
Every moment with you lasts a lifetime
Saying I love hardly seems enough
It’s more than love I feel
This longing to be close to you
To smell your hair
A pillow, a jacket, a place
Memories of you surround me
Memories I cling to
Till the next time we meet
Seconds pass like hours
Everything is meaningless till I’m with you again
Around your neck is the key to my heart
Wear it with pride, my love
Here in the darkness together
No secrets I hide
Here, alone with you
I can be myself
I am here and yet I am not
Sometimes I am invisible to you
But you cannot ignore me
You cannot ignore our love
Our bond is sacred
It can never be broken
This tangled web of emotion
Is cleared when I’m with you
Everything is perfect
Everything is simple
I long for your touch
for that time I get close to you
Just to taste
The sweetness of your lips
Just to feel
The softness of your skin
To feel something inside me
I’ve never felt before
Something so strong
I never want to let go
I want to lay with you
Forever
To hear you say my name
Is like heaven
I cannot tell how you feel
But I hope you feel the same
I cannot give you the things you need
But I hope you give me the chance to try
Wanting you to want me
Is all I need
You ware fantasy
The vision I see when I close my eyes
I want to give you everything
Fulfil your every desire
Make your every dream come true
Grant your every wish
I want to be the one to protect you
From the horrors of this world
Shrouded in the veil of my love
Forever immune
There is so much I don’t know
So much to learn
Teach me how to be
Guide me through this
A lifetime
An eternity
Forever
Together
Copyright ©
angel-1
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2009-01-02 07:37:36]
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Re: I Beg For Forgiveness
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by purplestary on
Friday, 2nd January 2009 @ 10:52:43 AM AEST
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| this is a beautiful peice of writing! i am in awe at your raw emotion and talent. |
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Re: I Beg For Forgiveness
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by Chamaron on
Friday, 2nd January 2009 @ 09:05:25 PM AEST
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This line is particularly beautiful:
"Around your neck is the key to my heart"
And I think the most powerful part of this poem is:
"I cannot give you the things you need
But I hope you give me the chance to try"
Great work. I hope you find peace. |
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Re: I Beg For Forgiveness
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by Jen_unknown_to_myself on
Friday, 2nd January 2009 @ 11:10:05 PM AEST
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| This is Extrodinary! I love it! I have to say I'm impressed with the ending, most love poems I read never have an ending that feels complete. Most have an open end, though yours ends with a sure and complete ending. Once again Great work. |
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Re: I Beg For Forgiveness
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by sidneyconrad23 on
Sunday, 21st November 2010 @ 06:31:22 AM AEST
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| Nice really really loved the way you used the words just keep writing nice. |
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