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What I've done
Contributed by
Voice of the Silent
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Wednesday, 31st December 2008 @ 04:02:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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everything will never be the same
and your to blame
I could have just said stop
But why I didn't I know not
I feel bad now
And it makes me mad now
I just want to die
oh sweet sweet suicide
In my mind it was so wrong
but my body same a different song
As I may try and try
I can never find a way to justify
what I've done
Copyright ©
Voice of the Silent
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2008-12-31 16:02:18]
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Re: What I've done
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by lostrelic on
Wednesday, 31st December 2008 @ 06:02:42 PM AEST
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i am still trying to understand what you did
but that i guess is the point of the write
its short but it takes on some sort of form |
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Re: What I've done
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 31st December 2008 @ 07:32:37 PM AEST
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good write.
-phil |
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Re: What I've done
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 31st December 2008 @ 10:12:18 PM AEST
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I hope this is just awesome poetry. Whatever you may have done (if this is based on you) Can't have been that bad. If you want to talk I am here.
Great write |
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Re: What I've done
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 31st December 2008 @ 10:54:14 PM AEST
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Well sweetie take it easy on yourself. We all mess up, that's why there's mercy and grace.
It's not hard to figure out what your talking about.
We're only human.
Luv, huggs, forgiveness, happy New year,
emy |
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Re: What I've done
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by Mars on
Thursday, 1st January 2009 @ 12:51:27 AM AEST
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| No one is perfect. Do not be afraid, and don't take yourself to seriously. We all end up dead in the end anyway =P. |
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Re: What I've done
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by Crow on
Thursday, 1st January 2009 @ 01:30:25 PM AEST
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| Hi Kelly...we all step-off at some point I think, but be kind to yourself. Vincent |
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