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Goodbye, Best Friend
Contributed by
Hoping_To_Be_Me
on
Saturday, 22nd March 2003 @ 06:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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If I told you what you meant to me,
would you listen?
would you care?
would you answer me?
Or leave.
Would you walk away as if you never knew me?
Am I that worthless?
Am I not good enough for you?
Are you listening?
Do meaningless words come out of my mouth?
Do I know you anymore?
Do you remember me?
DoI portrat nothing in your eyes?
Or something.
Do you care?
No.
I'm a stranger to you.
You're a stranger to me.
Goodbye, best friend.
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2003-03-22 06:05:00]
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Re: Goodbye, Best Friend
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by Dot on
Sunday, 23rd March 2003 @ 06:12:55 PM AEST
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| I'm sorry that you lost your best friend. This is so sad, but very well written. Your friend, Dot |
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Re: Goodbye, Best Friend
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by Hoping_To_Be_Me on
Sunday, 30th March 2003 @ 09:23:03 PM AEST
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| hey thanks for all the comments! i'm glad someone reads and likes them! |
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Re: Goodbye, Best Friend
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by Kirby on
Tuesday, 1st April 2003 @ 07:32:16 PM AEST
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| For that person to lose you they should be banished to a dumpster alive though! lol! Haveing a friend that is a poet is the best friend you could ever have! Better hunting next time! lol! |
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Re: Goodbye, Best Friend
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by Sara on
Friday, 4th April 2003 @ 11:20:22 PM AEST
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Another poem I can relate too!! Great write...!!
<3 Sara |
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Re: Goodbye, Best Friend
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by Trisha on
Friday, 12th September 2003 @ 09:10:10 PM AEST
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| i think if this was your best friend that she would try to wake something out. i know i would. if i could help my best friend but shes to busy with her new baby |
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