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Arriving..
Contributed by
3660Days
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Tuesday, 30th December 2008 @ 11:08:47 AM in AEST
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If I had known
what this place would become to me,
I would certainly have
at least gotten out of the car –
-would have kicked
and kissed the dirt beneath my feet
-would have hugged
and slugged the redness of the bricks
-would have flown
and fallen beneath the heavy air.
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Re: Arriving..
(User Rating: 1 ) by elle on
Tuesday, 30th December 2008 @ 01:11:30 PM AEST (User
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I like the open-endedness of this piece. . . letting me feel that for you this distinctive place held both wonderful memories & trying times as well. peace. elle |
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