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goodbye letter
Contributed by
elle
on
Monday, 29th December 2008 @ 06:53:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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Dear Friend,
If I turn in any direction,
I find a lovely thought of you.
If I seem upset,
it's just the baby inside me
wanting you. . . I loved you.
I surrender to the truth
that I cannot have you.
I can't.
You have no time
for me.
I wish you did.
I taste of honey
& my skin's as soft
as rose petals.
& still
I am lonely.
Life is showing
me it's secrets. . .
how to wait, how to let go.
I fell very calm.
& very, very pleased.
I await
the will of heaven. . .
peace, my brohter.
Copyright ©
elle
... [
2008-12-29 18:53:56]
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Re: goodbye letter
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by shelby on
Monday, 29th December 2008 @ 09:00:11 PM AEST
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This is so sweet yet touched with hints of sadness.
You worded this well, and took the reader along.
Nice work.
Michelle |
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Re: goodbye letter
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 30th December 2008 @ 12:27:24 PM AEST
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i loved it, superb flow and it was so easy to read. great work.
-phil |
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Re: goodbye letter
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 2nd February 2009 @ 01:33:51 AM AEST
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| wow. This one kinda left me speechless. Excellent!!! |
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