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The Way You Make Me Feel

Contributed by butterflyperfect on Monday, 29th December 2008 @ 02:50:32 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



You are always in my thoughts
You have changed me in many ways
And I feel like I am losing you
As I count the remaining days

I’ve needed you
From the day I’ve felt
My eyes turn weak to your beauty
And wanted to melt

Now I can’t stop hurting
Because you’ll soon be gone
My heart crumbles to pieces
Past the breaks of dawn

Love is a word
So strong, and it never ceases
If you are loving the right person
You never fall to pieces

I love you
And can’t explain why
It just overcame me
So, I pretended it was a lie

I now know its not
But still try to deny it
You and this feeling burn within me
Like a candle that’s always lit

I cannot get over you
No matter how I try
You have somehow changed me
And knowing this makes me cry

I love you
They are simple words
But they mean so much more
Than the sound of a thousand birds

Tears turn to waterfalls
From the truth I know
I turn to walk away from you
With my head drooped low

Since I can’t deny it
I must leave it behind
But I’ll always remember
How you were sweet and kind





Copyright © butterflyperfect ... [ 2008-12-29 14:50:32]
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Re: The Way You Make Me Feel (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 29th December 2008 @ 04:17:02 PM AEST
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a nice write, it flowed very well.

-phil




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