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You Still Feel The Same . . . Ben
Contributed by
myheartsvoice
on
Monday, 29th December 2008 @ 02:20:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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The
world's a different place
these days with all it's woes
and evil ways, and yet remain's
my point of view still beautiful
because of
you.
The
sun could fade
and stars may hide
it's all the same to
me,
what really count's
is what's inside
cause there you'll always
be.
To
dream i need not
anymore since angels
sent me you,
who gently tapped
on my hearts door
and made love's dream
come true.
You've paved the highway
of my life
with love that knows no end,
becoming more than just my wife
your my eternal
friend.
So many things
you could have been
before you met me
way back when,
your beauty
simply said it all
the world was at
your beckon
call.
But
no instead you set it free
and sent your heart my
way,
as though you knew
what was to be
like sunlight knows the
day.
The
world now wear's
a different face an image
with no name,
and yet i merely look at yours
and you still feel,
the
same.
Ben
myheartsvoice
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Re: You Still Feel The Same . . . Ben
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Monday, 29th December 2008 @ 08:54:20 PM AEST (User
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Your heart is singing through this Ben my friend.
Another breath taking and lovely write.
Happy New Year to you a couple days early
Hugs
Michelle |
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Re: You Still Feel The Same . . . Ben
(User Rating: 1 ) by venkat on
Tuesday, 30th December 2008 @ 05:46:52 AM AEST (User
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A very delightful song of your hearts voice..
Happy new year: friend-) venkat |
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Re: You Still Feel The Same . . . Ben
(User Rating: 1 ) by karoody on
Tuesday, 30th December 2008 @ 03:23:47 PM AEST (User
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Ben,
You literally brought tears to my eyes
with this one. Your poetry is always moving,
and this one especially caught me in its realm!
This is definitely among my favorites
Smiles and Blessings to you and yours
Kara
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Re: You Still Feel The Same . . . Ben
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 31st December 2008 @ 10:16:18 PM AEST (User
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This i8s a really beautiful poem! |
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Re: You Still Feel The Same . . . Ben
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Saturday, 3rd January 2009 @ 01:18:09 AM AEST (User
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Yep, ya' definitely don't fix omething that's not broke.
Ben, this is definitely inspiration at it's best. You can take every day words and arrange them with such an amzing articulation...so fluid... such great flow...that..well, I am quite impressed and even somewhat envious. I wish I had what you two have. *sigh* Maybe someday. I'm glad that you honor us by sharing your art and inspiration with the rest of us.
Take care... and also hope you had a great Christmas and New Year.
Tim |
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Re: You Still Feel The Same . . . Ben
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Saturday, 3rd January 2009 @ 01:27:44 AM AEST (User
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Heh, somewhere in there I also meant to say I like the way you format your stanzas. It's such an even flow sort of thing. |
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