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A Daughter's Sonnet
Contributed by
anomalei
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Monday, 29th December 2008 @ 12:29:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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This is what I thought dads were supposed to do
Everything within their power and more
Keeping their daughter from falling to the floor
Yes I am young but I still thought I knew
Words now spoken, displayed - long overdue
Weights I refused to carry anymore
Things you say that cut like liar and whore
Still something you would like me to pursue?
Twist this however you would like it to fit
Despite how you say it I know you will
Something you possess, quite a skill
Perhaps I'll be sorry for letting me quit,
That same mistake again I won't admit;
Nothing less than what I want to fulfill.
Copyright ©
anomalei
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2008-12-29 12:29:25]
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Re: A Daughter's Sonnet
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by suze on
Sunday, 4th January 2009 @ 08:47:56 PM AEST
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This is a beautifully personal entry. I can't relate seeing as my father is deceased, but its wonderfully written, and I hope things look better for you soon. Ahh poetry, such great poetry :)
-sue.
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Re: A Daughter's Sonnet
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 25th September 2009 @ 09:44:44 AM AEST
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Passionate writing. you don't get enough of that on here.
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