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And....
Contributed by
unknown_utopia
on
Sunday, 28th December 2008 @ 08:09:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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A waterfall of love
crescendos
and
transforms into a river
flowing gently,
I float upon a wave
feeling so emotional
and
I never felt like this before.
Softly I moan and sigh
as something sweet
drops
into my mind
and
it caresses
with kisses
that get me so high,
no words can explain the feeling
of the many sensations
as they ebb and flow.
I sway
in a daze
I am no longer in control
and
it is so beautiful.
Copyright ©
unknown_utopia
... [
2008-12-28 20:09:30]
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Re: And....
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 29th December 2008 @ 07:20:23 AM AEST
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it flowed beautifully. great work.
-phil |
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Re: And....
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by anomalei on
Monday, 29th December 2008 @ 12:39:07 PM AEST
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i love this - the title, and how it intertwines with everything.. the overall just beauty of the poem itself, the imagery... fabulous.
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Re: And....
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by elle on
Monday, 29th December 2008 @ 05:26:14 PM AEST
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| this piece is very pretty. . . elle |
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Re: And....
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 7th January 2009 @ 01:48:01 AM AEST
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beautiful.
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