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The yearless summer...
Contributed by
3660Days
on
Saturday, 27th December 2008 @ 07:29:03 PM in AEST
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It doesn’t really make much sense, you know
how I could have landed here in 1995
and yet...somehow...we found ourselves that summer
swept straight into 1809...
Shooting marbles beneath the pine trees,
and resting on their needle beds,
climbing out my bedroom window
along a sturdy rope of tied-together sheets.
And OH! what fun we had
chasing dandelion fuzzies through the air,
along the green-grass-carpet
of our native homeland, Briarwood.
Not once did we touch the “glorious 90’s”
with all their filth and grime...
and who needs to, when you’re living
in grand 1809?
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3660Days
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2008-12-27 19:29:03]
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Re: The yearless summer...
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by Spike on
Sunday, 28th December 2008 @ 07:10:55 AM AEST
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a lovely blend of fantasy and nostalgia. message heard, loud and clear.
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Re: The yearless summer...
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by anomalei on
Monday, 29th December 2008 @ 12:31:57 PM AEST
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delightful read!
great imagery and just a wonderful setting and overall tone... lovely!
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