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Personallity defects in my brain
Contributed by
Voice of the Silent
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Saturday, 27th December 2008 @ 06:39:35 PM in AEST
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I wrote this for my friend he's trying to write a book and this is what I think he writing about from what he's told me
All my life I've tried to protect everyones life
but now I've gone insane
and now I hold the knife
taking away from others life
I don't even know I do it
It's all something wrong with my brain
One minite I'm safe and sane
the next I'm killing people I once loved
is it all in my mind
But I have no time
I want to know
What the hell happened to me
All I can see
is in shadows
the whole truth I never know
It isn't me holding the knife
I want to protect life
but to late I've gone insane
I have a personallity defect in my brain
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Re: Personallity defects in my brain
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by karoody on
Sunday, 28th December 2008 @ 02:14:46 AM AEST
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a very interesting subject
i like the way you wrote this
you captured the confusion so well
smiles,
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Re: Personallity defects in my brain
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 28th December 2008 @ 06:27:05 PM AEST
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yes, a very interesting poem, good work.
-phil
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