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Handkerchief Surrenders
Contributed by
lnnie
on
Friday, 26th December 2008 @ 03:06:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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If I can but see
those reaching arms before me,
feel flat against my chest
your welcoming breasts;
for me this would content.
If I could but feel
that dizzying quivering
your touch makes,
that for me would content.
If I can see
my own soul stirrings
in your beckoning eyes,
my contour
fitting your contour
perfectly,
I'd sigh
the perfect sigh.
So close we;
paper thin
the space between;
that all points of contact
blend
smooth skin
against smooth skin.
.
Give me your handkerchief;
wave it
before me;
and here is mine
in sweet
surrender
buffeted
by that perfect breeze;
my
and your
deep breathing
brings.
Copyright ©
lnnie
... [
2008-12-26 15:06:43]
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Re: Handkerchief Surrenders
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by karoody on
Saturday, 27th December 2008 @ 02:55:40 AM AEST
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breathtakingly beautiful
i love the peaceful, romantic scene
you have drawn for us
thank you for allowing us into
this area of your heart
smiles and blessings to you and yours
kara
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Re: Handkerchief Surrenders
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 27th December 2008 @ 06:27:56 AM AEST
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it flowed wonderfully, the imagery was great, good work.
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