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Echo
Contributed by
ThirtyDays
on
Saturday, 22nd March 2003 @ 12:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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These words echo in my head
Of a love once alive
Now left for dead
" I love you for what you've done for me "
I said, too afraid to be totally free
" I'm in too deep.. I love you "
She said, could this be true?
" I have daydreamed of what life would be like with you "
We said, sharing and caring as we grew
" I'm very pleased "
She said, adding to my ease
" What are you doing here? "
She said, igniting my worst fear
" I need to know you'll be there for me "
I asked, needing to feel, feeling to need
" You made me happy when I thought I'd not be happy again. I am setting you free "
She said, offering thanks, but cutting me off at the knee
" I am alone now."
I reflected, holding my brow
" Things don't have to change "
She said, her voice sounding strange
" I have to change "
I replied, my world is rearranged
" It's not up for debate, I don't feel like you do "
She added, so defiant, it must be true
" Why does it hurt so much? "
I asked, no answer expected for such
"Is compassion also not a part of passion"
I thought quietly, knowing of no answer
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2003-03-22 00:45:00]
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Re: Echo
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by juliette on
Saturday, 22nd March 2003 @ 12:54:09 AM AEST
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I really enjoyed reading this. It's a wonderful poem. Thanks for sharing!
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Re: Echo
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by Fuzzy on
Tuesday, 5th January 2010 @ 11:50:14 AM AEST
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Well you never know when you click on
A Mystery, well for me it turned out
to be a Wonderful poem really
like the way this has been written
great write
Take care
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