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No One Could Love You More (Than I Do)
Contributed by
Chamaron
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Thursday, 25th December 2008 @ 10:16:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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We’ve got these wild ideas
Of our happily ever after
We’ve got these wild dreams
We’ll fabricate with laughter.
Laying in your arms, I tell
The stories our hands weave.
For once I feel something,
Love I never want to leave.
Stepping stones to get to you,
Over raging rivers so bold.
But nothing could stop me
Once within your heart’s hold.
Words of ones once wise, I know
Be ever cautious, I really am.
But I’m ready to destroy
This emotionally isolating dam.
No man is an island, but can’t I be?
I was, until you rowed a boat to me.
Oh beautiful soul, how did you know?
To take a chance on someone ready to go?
So willingly, so innocently, so persistent
You are all I needed, wanted, could ask for.
There’s no way I could repay you,
But no one but I could love you more.
Copyright ©
Chamaron
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2008-12-25 22:16:09]
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Re: No One Could Love You More (Than I Do)
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by djs on
Friday, 26th December 2008 @ 09:21:31 AM AEST
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| i sincerely hope that whomever you wrote this about realizes how lucky they are to have you. you are great with your words. |
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Re: No One Could Love You More (Than I Do)
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 27th December 2008 @ 06:20:13 AM AEST
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a very powerful, touching write. the first stanza was the best, the word 'fabricate' fitted perfectly in there, good job.
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