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This Place In Time
Contributed by
movax
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Thursday, 25th December 2008 @ 06:45:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The times I've lived
The love I've given
The longing inside
For something right
This quest in life
For something real
Has become for me
This horrible ordeal
To long for love
That never comes
A pain that hits me everyday
So hard it hurts in every way
I don't wish to foresee the day that will come
Where the good of this world will come undone
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movax
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2008-12-25 18:45:44]
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Re: This Place In Time
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by Chamaron on
Thursday, 25th December 2008 @ 10:19:54 PM AEST
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| To question the last lines: Has it already? Very thought-provoking write. Nice job. |
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Re: This Place In Time
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by Balmain_Tiger on
Friday, 26th December 2008 @ 06:19:30 AM AEST
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We only foresee what comes true if we don't act on what we foresee, and if we act on what we foresee then there is every likelihood it won't happen.
You got me thinking..... |
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