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But what does it all represent
Contributed by
Voice of the Silent
on
Thursday, 25th December 2008 @ 04:08:06 PM in AEST
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People give out all the gifts and presents
but what does it all represent
is it out of love or compassion
Or is it an investment
of what they might get
in return from them giving you a present
what does it all represent
is it all just a show
Just because people want to know
what you'll give in return
I though it was all good will
but my belief has gone down hill
for know when everyone gives out gifts and presents
I can't even think of what it might represent
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Voice of the Silent
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2008-12-25 16:08:06]
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Re: But what does it all represent
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 27th December 2008 @ 06:11:06 AM AEST
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i feel the same way. good write, very honest.
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Re: But what does it all represent
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by Crow on
Saturday, 27th December 2008 @ 10:56:11 AM AEST
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| good write Kelly, a realistic look at it all. Lane |
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Re: But what does it all represent
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by Spike on
Sunday, 28th December 2008 @ 07:43:26 AM AEST
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Good capture of the emotional dilemma around seasonal gift giving.I suggest that you can only know what's in your own heart, so give with love, Kelly, and let the rest sort itself out.
Spike |
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