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A Realization
Contributed by
mariahneu1
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Tuesday, 23rd December 2008 @ 03:17:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
ambiguous
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Tender cherry blossoms swayed in the wind,
Surrounded by zephyr -- calmness, beauty,
Basking in the spring sun enlightened my soul.
To some, this would ignite bliss,
But I was not satisfied,
I needed affirmation.
Now, I wish for the world to reverse before I had sinned,
Hoping that I could just feel the zephyr,
Its reassurance that all would be well -- the Sun accompanying its glory,
Before I had committed the misconception.
I admired the apple on the Tree of Knowledge.
Captivating,
Inviting,
Addictive.
Upon first bite,
Realizing my demise,
My stupidity,
Ignorance.
Forced to exit the garden, I was unsure of the circumstances.
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mariahneu1
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2008-12-23 15:17:38]
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Re: A Realization
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by SilverRain on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2008 @ 03:33:50 PM AEST
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I very much enjoyed reading this.
You did an excellent job. Well done.
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Re: A Realization
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2008 @ 06:24:43 PM AEST
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a great retelling of the story of eve. it flowed well and you included some terrific imagery, great writing.
-phil
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