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Who I am today
Contributed by
Flygirl90
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Tuesday, 23rd December 2008 @ 02:28:47 PM in AEST
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Christmas is coming,
just like every year.
But this time is different,
'cause I want to disappear.
I can't explain it,
I don't know why.
This time of year,
I don't usually cry.
I'm nobody,
just look away.
I just keep wondering,
who I am today.
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Flygirl90
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2008-12-23 14:28:47]
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Re: Who I am today
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2008 @ 03:01:26 PM AEST
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Short...and sad. :-( It is a very deep and interesting write.
Take care.
Tim |
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Re: Who I am today
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by SilverRain on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2008 @ 03:41:26 PM AEST
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Very powerful piece and I think many can relate to this. Worse time to be alone. Hang in there and keep writing...always helps.
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Re: Who I am today
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by LoveStruck_Hippie on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2008 @ 04:51:47 PM AEST
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I have to agree there is intense depth to this piece. A question asked that many of us spend a majority of our lives pondering. A piece of advise I was given some time ago ... to find ourselves and to find happiness we simply need to look within.
Peace
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Re: Who I am today
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2008 @ 06:19:22 PM AEST
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a sad but passionate write. keep going, keep writing.
-phil |
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Re: Who I am today
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by lidachur on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2008 @ 06:29:55 PM AEST
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| cute and deep. I bet your beatiful. |
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