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Love, double edged
Contributed by
blain
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Thursday, 11th July 2002 @ 08:21:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Love,
It heals when it feels like no one understands,
Love,
Double-edged, a lethal weapon in young hands.
Love,
It makes lighter the burden that you share,
Love,
It creates a pain near impossible to bear.
Love,
It lights a fire in the coldest hearts of men,
I've had my share of Love,
And i'll never love again.
Copyright ©
blain
... [
2002-07-11 20:21:23]
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Re: Love, double edged
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by Chrissie on
Thursday, 11th July 2002 @ 11:32:57 PM AEST
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I like this a lot blain...well done..
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Re: Love, double edged
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by blain on
Friday, 12th July 2002 @ 12:32:42 AM AEST
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| ^^ thank u... |
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Re: Love, double edged
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by Kassidi on
Saturday, 13th July 2002 @ 04:41:50 PM AEST
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Blain
This was a very wonderful, but sad poem. Like Chrissie said, Very Well Writen!
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Re: Love, double edged
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 25th January 2003 @ 07:16:04 PM AEST
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| Excellent, Blain. If the message is what you are feeling, don't count on the last line. There are things in your future that are going to be great,..... even a special lady. SusieQ |
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