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my desire hurts me
Contributed by
fortunesdancer
on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2008 @ 12:04:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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i want to love you but no!
your eyes hazel autum glow
your lips of fire and brimstone
your hair shimmering Gold
we loved but we never told
but you sunder your looks
in a thunderous rage
a wild beast in a cage
your passion thrills me on edge
so much that i would jump off the ledge
to but caress your lips with mine
Just give me a Sighn!
you feel the same
you fill me with shame
when you gance away
don't you to remember that summers day
and we both dreamt away
when you'd say
i love you
and my reply
i love you to
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fortunesdancer
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2008-12-23 12:04:29]
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Re: my desire hurts me
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2008 @ 01:19:53 PM AEST
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outstanding writing, the imagery was fantastic. it flowed really well as well. great work.
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Re: my desire hurts me
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by SilverRain on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2008 @ 03:58:35 PM AEST
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| This a really good poem. Liked the emotion that it brought across. If I can add my two cents..JUST DO IT! |
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Re: my desire hurts me
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by lidachur on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2008 @ 06:31:44 PM AEST
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