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Minuscule
Contributed by
mariahneu1
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Tuesday, 23rd December 2008 @ 12:02:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
hbadday
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To what do I owe this introduction,
But of course,
The grandness unseen,
I show no remorse,
I can't intervene.
The plot appears lonesome,
No style or content to accompany,
The little nothings that I present -- but a fragment of significance.
"Thank You for Not Smoking" signs litter walls in a smoggy room,
Minuscule deterrent to would-be non-smokers,
Thank you for not smoking in the smoking section.
"I love you's" dance across the pages,
Of over-rated novels,
Contemporary romance.
"I love you" means little,
Simple way to end a page and begin a new.
The phrase that now means short term -- till I find a replacement.
Tentative love -- unreal
Does minuscule mien not suffice you?
Copyright ©
mariahneu1
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2008-12-23 12:02:23]
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Re: Minuscule
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2008 @ 01:17:41 PM AEST
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cynical stuff. i liked your frank honesty and boldness. it was refreshing and interesting. i particularly liked this bit:
"I love you" means little,
Simple way to end a page and begin a new.
The phrase that now means short term -- till I find a replacement.
it certainly made me think, like the rest of the poem. great work.
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Re: Minuscule
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by mariahneu1 on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2008 @ 02:46:11 PM AEST
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Why, thank you. =]
I actually got the inspiration to write this poem when I was bored in English class, noticing a "Thank You for Not Smoking" sign in the classroom. lol |
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Re: Minuscule
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by SilverRain on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2008 @ 04:04:22 PM AEST
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| Very interesting and beautifully written piece. Well done. |
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