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Winter Death
Contributed by
midnight_writer
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Tuesday, 23rd December 2008 @ 09:23:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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First it was the cold to numb me;
Bitter cold surrounded me
All I thought about
Disconnected; frozen.
Soon following; white to blind me.
Endless nothingness
Even under closed eyelids
Nothing
Now will it be the silence
To deafen me?
That'll be the missing piece
To killing me
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2008-12-23 09:23:08]
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Re: Winter Death
(User Rating: 1 )
by elle on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2008 @ 10:24:11 AM AEST
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| commanding illustration with so few words. . . great description of how winter feels inside & out. peace elle |
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Re: Winter Death
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by mariahneu1 on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2008 @ 03:06:41 PM AEST
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| I love how you can say much and spread your message with few words. Poignant write. I look forward to reading more of your poems. =] |
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